A short story.
I’ve got to number this because
1) this read like I had a stroke in the best kind of way
2) the description in this one is one that doesn’t pull me in but washes me along, like, I loved that feeling!
3) ended up losing track of time because I was so focused on it
4) if your goal was to confuse, stop any breathing, and snatch away the feeling for time and place, well mission accomplished
What a great piece!
Thank you so much. I love how different people will get different things. But, yes, confusion was important. There's a lot of subtext here
That was a superb, atmospheric, almost-stream of consciousness piece of writing. I was definitely getting a Near Dark vibe there too at times...
Thank you 🖤 Near Dark vibes is the ultimate compliment 😆🙏
Fantastic, Dylan — what a great piece. I was mesmerised 👌🏻❤️
🙏 Appreciate the kind words!
I’ve got to number this because
1) this read like I had a stroke in the best kind of way
2) the description in this one is one that doesn’t pull me in but washes me along, like, I loved that feeling!
3) ended up losing track of time because I was so focused on it
4) if your goal was to confuse, stop any breathing, and snatch away the feeling for time and place, well mission accomplished
What a great piece!
Thank you so much. I love how different people will get different things. But, yes, confusion was important. There's a lot of subtext here
That was a superb, atmospheric, almost-stream of consciousness piece of writing. I was definitely getting a Near Dark vibe there too at times...
Thank you 🖤 Near Dark vibes is the ultimate compliment 😆🙏
Fantastic, Dylan — what a great piece. I was mesmerised 👌🏻❤️
🙏 Appreciate the kind words!