i tend to skim read everything by default, but when it getsya - I have to go back and read slowly, because thats when you spot the beauty, the connections, those delicate touches - those things you put in your own work that you ARE DYING TO KNOW somebody else spotted and understoofd.
Jesus, that is was a trip. I had to go back to piece it together for myself but very good brutal stuff.
Thanks, man! Glad you went back for the pieces! Always fun dropping clues along the way
THE ENDING OH MY GOD
Hahaha thanks for checking it out 🖤
Bosworth always delivers 🫡
Fantastic! Brutally good!
Thanks, Liz! Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it. "Brutally good" is what I'm striving for 🙏
horrificly righteous.
the building tension and imagery are so so so well done.
instant re read at half speed.
some killer lines.😎
You're awesome, Nick. First time anyone's admitted to rereading my stuff 🤣
i tend to skim read everything by default, but when it getsya - I have to go back and read slowly, because thats when you spot the beauty, the connections, those delicate touches - those things you put in your own work that you ARE DYING TO KNOW somebody else spotted and understoofd.
This gave me so much anxiety. Great read!
Yessss! Thanks so much for reading. This one still messes me up when I read it back lol
Very well written!
Appreciate that so much 🙏
For sure!
I was hooked by this!
Thank you so much 🙏
Love reading these kinds of posts thank you
Thanks so much. That means a lot!