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Sapna's avatar

The narrative voice is so powerful like a magician holding all your attention that you are scared to blink fearing you will miss something. I am pretty much invested

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Dylan Bosworth's avatar

That's such a huge compliment. Thank you so much 🙏

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Pablo Báez's avatar

It was a little uncomfortable for me, because in a way I can see myself in him, the way he feels.

Discomfort aside, the premise is captivating and the way this chapter plays out it's inevitable to not get absorbed in this world.

Looking forward for the rest! Can tell shit's going to get spicy

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Dylan Bosworth's avatar

It gets pretty dark. When one can't feel pain, what lengths will they go to to find pleasure? Philosophical, but also extreme.

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